Jonathan Lung
Ms. Li
ENG 101-005
9 September 2016
How
Pizza Changed My Life Forever
December
24st, 1999 is the day I was introduced to pizza. Who knew that a
juicy pizza filled with melted cheese and crunchy pepperoni would convince a
picky baby to finally give up his fasting?
About
a year before that life-changing day, my mother was trying to figure out ways
to get me to eat. She would go to the store after work and buy one of every
type of baby food that was available. Much to my mother’s dismay, I would not
eat any of them. No matter how hard she tried to convince me that sweet
potatoes or sweet peas were good, I would either shake my head in disgust or
spit out the food. This war would continue every day and night.
Everyday,
my parents would get more worried watching me not eat anything. Every doctor
visit always ended with the same conversation: “Don’t worry he will be fine. He
will find something he likes to eat.” My parent was still unconvinced and
continued to find more innovative ways to get me to start eating, again to no avail.
Christmas
season finally arrived. They were getting ready to go to Atlanta to visit my
sister as a Christmas surprise. It was around 8 o’clock at night on Christmas
Eve when my parents left the little town of Meridian. Driving from Meridian,
Mississippi to Atlanta is about a four to five hours drive.
My
parents drove for about four hours before they had to stop by a gas station to
pick up more gas and food. Right as they pull up to a Shell gas station, I woke
up from my hibernation to my parent’s astonishment. They decided to bring me
inside so I could get some fresh air. As if God had timed it just right, Hunt
Brothers pizza had just finished cooking a small pepperoni pizza and set it on
the heating rack. My parents were hungry so they decided to buy two of the
pizzas. Each pizza was the size of a small Frisbee divided into four slices.
After
my mom brought the pizza and me back to the car, my dad finished pumping gas
and was leaving the gas station when I famously cried out, “I’m hungry.” In
that moment of joy, my mom opened up the pizza box and gave it to me to see if
I would eat it. It did not take long for me to finish both boxes of pizza that
night. In fact, I told my parents I wanted more; it was the best Christmas miracle
they had ever experienced. And, to top it off, it had just struck 12 o’clock
midnight, signaling Christmas day was here.
Pizza
became my staple food, devouring nothing but pizza for the next several years.
Pizza was my lifesaver and my parent’s stress reliever. I remember walking with
my mother to a Little Caesar to buy the kid’s pizza. Those were some of my
fondest memories. To this day, I still cannot refuse a good pizza with the
perfectly cooked cheese and perfectly crispy pepperoni.
Solid job. I think you could delete the following sentence, as the detail is not altogether necessary/integral to your narrative: "Driving from Meridian, Mississippi to Atlanta is about a four to five hours drive."
ReplyDeleteI also see a few lingering grammatical errors (for example, in the first sentence of the last paragraph).
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