Jonathan Lung
Why is local food
better?
Buying
and eating local food from a farmer’s market creates a satisfying and enriching
feeling of not only eating healthier provide a healthier alternative it also
helps with sustainability as we use less artificial material and use more of
the natural world the way we had been for so long. When my family and I went to
the farmer’s market every Saturday morning, I always enjoyed tasting the fresh
honey dripping from the spoon or the sweet smell of oranges that was picked the
day before. To compare the supermarket and local products, it is hardly a
competition. People in the 21st century are eating worse than we
could have ever possibly imagined: eating artificial flavored food,
manufactured can goods, and processed meat. While the low cost might be an
incentive to buy all of the supermarket products we have now, there is no price
to our health and well being.
When
comparing food products from a supermarket to a local market, it is noticeable
the difference in taste. One example I personally attest the difference in is
lobsters. When we wanted lobsters, we would always get it from the stores. However
when we visited Florida’s coastline, my parents brought several live lobsters
that were caught not from port. Not knowing any difference between store-bought
food and fresh food, I questioned my parent’s logic, wondering why they would
deal with a live lobster when a cleaned out, prepared lobster was next door in
Wal-Mart. After eating the fresh lobster, I finally understood the differences
between the lobsters in Wal-Mart and the lobsters from the fishing boats. The
enriching flavor sticks with every bite from a freshly caught lobster, a
quality that a store lobster lacks.
We
live to eat so why not eat the best possible food available to us?
Be careful about overusing passive voice! (Also, you may want to edit your first sentence more carefully.) Overall though, good job.
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